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Gossamer

Gossamer - Renita Pizzitola I got through chapter 1. And quit. I did not enjoy it at all. I was willing to plow through the sticky sweet romance and teen girl angst and silly descriptions of the girl eyeing the boy in the cafeteria, but I just couldn't get past the stilted dialogue. Teen use contractions. They slur and use slang. You don't have to write with all the slang, but please use contractions to make the dialogue sound natural!